KINDLE [The Builders Sword The Legendary Builder #1]


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  1. says: J.A. Cipriano ò 3 free read free read Ò eBook or Kindle ePUB ò J.A. Cipriano review The Builders Sword The Legendary Builder #1

    free read Ò eBook or Kindle ePUB ò J.A. Cipriano KINDLE [The Builders Sword The Legendary Builder #1] Middle school fantasy writing projectIf you are reading this book then you probably have an idea of what you are getting into by the cover image alone The entire story is a high schooler's fantasy written at middle school writing level A lack of vocabulary or general awareness to prior sentences led to horrendous repetition of adjectives and phrases while dialogue was so full of forced overexplaination that I giggled on several occasions

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    KINDLE [The Builders Sword The Legendary Builder #1] A good read A LitRPG story Boy finds sword and gets taken to hell to save it Harem genre story Crafting Level Progression with new Skills purchased and other RPG mechanics

  3. says: free read Ò eBook or Kindle ePUB ò J.A. Cipriano KINDLE [The Builders Sword The Legendary Builder #1] J.A. Cipriano ò 3 free read

    KINDLE [The Builders Sword The Legendary Builder #1] What Did I just read? This is basically a middle school boy's wet dream come true I'm like any red blooded American man born in the midwest with a strong distaste for modern third wave feminism but if this doesn't objectify women in the worst possible way I'm not sure what does The entire cast of only female cha

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    review The Builders Sword The Legendary Builder #1 KINDLE [The Builders Sword The Legendary Builder #1] J.A. Cipriano ò 3 free read It was nice way to mix litrpg and fantasy without making it complicated or over the top I kinda loved it

  5. says: KINDLE [The Builders Sword The Legendary Builder #1] J.A. Cipriano ò 3 free read

    KINDLE [The Builders Sword The Legendary Builder #1] A bumbling impulsive Slurpee monkey is teleported to a different world from his incompetence and clumsiness by a hot chick She claims to be a demon and wanting his soul but seems to be as much of a demon as a Ha

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    KINDLE [The Builders Sword The Legendary Builder #1] I really liked this book Nothing crazy happens here If your looking for intimate scenes skip this There is sex in the book but it's im

  7. says: free read Ò eBook or Kindle ePUB ò J.A. Cipriano J.A. Cipriano ò 3 free read KINDLE [The Builders Sword The Legendary Builder #1]

    J.A. Cipriano ò 3 free read free read Ò eBook or Kindle ePUB ò J.A. Cipriano review The Builders Sword The Legendary Builder #1 Mediocre LitRPGPretty standard LitRPG mechanics are combined with a harem world setting and a destined one protagonistRecommended for experienced fans of the subgenres only

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    KINDLE [The Builders Sword The Legendary Builder #1] J.A. Cipriano ò 3 free read review The Builders Sword The Legendary Builder #1 I picked this book up because I have read books by this author before and while never anything great they were at the least a lot of fun This book was not fun it was just tedious The allure of the LitRPG genre continues to elude me I get there

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    KINDLE [The Builders Sword The Legendary Builder #1] An interesting premise terrible execution It reads as if someone wrote down the actions in an RTS game mixed wit

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    KINDLE [The Builders Sword The Legendary Builder #1] i'm not even mad it's no surprise when shit turns out to be shit

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review The Builders Sword The Legendary Builder #1

free read Ò eBook or Kindle ePUB ò J.A. Cipriano J.A. Cipriano ò 3 free read review The Builders Sword The Legendary Builder #1 Arthur never expected to wind up in Hell At least not because he found an ancient sword in a pawnshop To make matters worse Hell isn't as he thought It's a desolat. What Did I just read This is basically a middle school boy s wet dream come true I m like any red blooded American man born in the midwest with a strong distaste for modern third wave feminism but if this doesn t objectify women in the worst possible way I m not sure what does The entire cast of only female characters are one dimensional and basically only live to please the male protagonist The protagonist male character goes from being an absolute loser to an all powerful benevolent dictator There will be an untold number of 14 year old boys sneaking this book into their kindles and hoping their parents don t find out That said I read the whole thing so what does that say about me

free read Ò eBook or Kindle ePUB ò J.A. CiprianoThe Builders Sword The Legendary Builder #1

free read Ò eBook or Kindle ePUB ò J.A. Cipriano J.A. Cipriano ò 3 free read review The Builders Sword The Legendary Builder #1 E wasteland under siege by an all consuming void known as the DarknessNow he's trapped with no way home a ragtag army of women and a sword whose only power is to m. A bumbling impulsive Slurpee monkey is teleported to a different world from his incompetence and clumsiness by a hot chick She claims to be a demon and wanting his soul but seems to be as much of a demon as a Halloween slutty nurse is a medical professional They are in some super small not really hellish version of Hell where he is the only male and women shyly invite him to a threesome Throughout the book the builder aka Slurpee monkey is able to arrange people s abilities as though he were in a bad video game Never once does he uestion whether he is in a delusional coma Personally I believe it is not unlikely that while cleaning his new sword he somehow managed to fall out of his apartment window onto his head and everything that follows is his subconscious The story is poor enough that it wouldn t really make it any worse if it were trueLater in the book he then goes on to win a battle Not through being clever having better gear better tactics better people or even the elusive high ground but through trying really hard If this sort of novel appeals good news

J.A. Cipriano ò 3 free read

free read Ò eBook or Kindle ePUB ò J.A. Cipriano J.A. Cipriano ò 3 free read review The Builders Sword The Legendary Builder #1 Odify the abilities of those around him Not exactly winning oddsWorse if the Darkness isn't stopped not only will it devour Hell but Earth will be next on the menu. I picked this book up because I have read books by this author before and while never anything great they were at the least a lot of fun This book was not fun it was just tedious The allure of the LitRPG genre continues to elude me I get there are people out there who love video games but it seems really strange to take concepts custom built for that medium because it is the best solution for that particular platform then transport them to a completely different medium that doesn t suit those concepts at all Things like drop down menus for character stats and user experience points works in a game because in a game you need to measure progress in order to complete an objective A novel not only doesn t need that but it actually weighs the story down Rather than reading like a cool new power for a fantasy character the ability to be a near god in a video game world it instead feels like someone is describing their experience playing a game when the very nature of games make them interesting when they are experienced directly by the user and not third hand The sacrifice to having character traits listed in drop down form is that you end up with one dimensional characters Rather than building up their skills and deeds over the course of a novel in order to make readers understand the characters better we are instead told about them in list format which is the least engaging way to learn about them Therefore after a third of this novel has gone by I didn t care about a single character and I didn t care about this story 1 star because it failed to do the basics of storytelling

  • Kindle Edition
  • 338
  • The Builders Sword The Legendary Builder #1
  • J.A. Cipriano
  • English
  • 22 May 2018
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